{"id":2473,"date":"2011-02-08T09:48:04","date_gmt":"2011-02-08T16:48:04","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.talesfromthe.net\/jon\/?p=2473"},"modified":"2011-02-08T09:48:04","modified_gmt":"2011-02-08T16:48:04","slug":"making-good-use-of-a-phone-call-part-3-of-the-agile-one-pager","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/2024.thenexus.today\/index.php\/2011\/02\/08\/making-good-use-of-a-phone-call-part-3-of-the-agile-one-pager\/","title":{"rendered":"Making good use of a phone call: part 3 of &#8220;The Agile One-pager&#8221; (DRAFT)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"color: #ff00ff;\">Draft!  Revised version to appear <a href=\"http:\/\/www.nwen.org\/blog\/\">on NWEN&#8217;s blog<\/a>.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/www.nwen.org\/index.php?option=com_events&amp;Itemid=15&amp;id=526\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright\" style=\"border: 0pt none;\" title=\"Northwest Entrepeneurs Network logo\" src=\"http:\/\/www.nwen.org\/templates\/nwen_home\/images\/logo.gif\" alt=\"\" width=\"369\" height=\"87\" \/><\/a><em>In the first two parts of the series (<a href=\"http:\/\/www.nwen.org\/blog\/?p=392\">1<\/a>, <a href=\"http:\/\/www.nwen.org\/blog\/?p=399\">2<\/a>)  we looked at the reasons to do a one-page executive summary and made  some initial progress &#8212; enough to get to the point where we could get  some useful feedback.\u00c2\u00a0 Now we&#8217;re in the heart of the iteration loop, steadily improving it.\u00c2\u00a0 For impatient readers, here&#8217;s the tips:<\/em><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><em>Advisor time is a scarce resource, so make good use of it. <\/em><em>Let them know where you want help: which questions are open, what<\/em><em> sections you want to concentrate on.<\/em><\/li>\n<li><em>Think about your goals and a rough agenda for each meeting to make sure you use your time well. <\/em><em>Try to give people enough time to read the document before the meeting. <\/em><\/li>\n<li><em>Be yourself, tell a story, and try to write the way you speak.\u00c2\u00a0 Try <em>verbally explaining why your idea is so great and ask what resonates, then incorporate that language into your one-pager.<br \/>\n<\/em><\/em><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>At the end of <a href=\"http:\/\/www.nwen.org\/blog\/?p=399\">part 2<\/a>, I had set up a phone meeting with somebody I&#8217;ll call &#8220;Rebecca&#8221; to give me feedback on my one-page executive summary.\u00c2\u00a0 I still had a lot of holes in the document, so I took another pass through it and put in something for every section except the financial projections.\u00c2\u00a0 As usual it took longer than I expected so before I realized it, it was almost 6 p.m.\u00c2\u00a0\u00c2\u00a0 Yikes!<\/p>\n<p><!--more-->Before mailing to to her, I spent a few minutes thinking about my goals and a potential agenda for the call.\u00c2\u00a0 For example, I wasn&#8217;t sure how much she knew about the space, so I made sure to leave 5 minutes or so for me to give her an overview.\u00c2\u00a0 When you&#8217;re deeply involved in an area, it&#8217;s easy to assume everybody else also knows all the details &#8230; but they almost certainly don&#8217;t. \u00c2\u00a0 Then I wrote up some cover mail that also gave her some calibration about where I though the document currently was (&#8220;verrrrry preliminary&#8221;) and sent it off.<\/p>\n<p><em>Here&#8217;s the version I sent her.\u00c2\u00a0 (link coming soon)<\/em><\/p>\n<p><a title=\"Photo Sharing\" href=\"http:\/\/www.flickr.com\/photos\/31110324@N03\/5428471288\/\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/farm6.static.flickr.com\/5015\/5428471288_761b161b46.jpg\" alt=\"This meeting starts in 1 minute\" width=\"426\" height=\"117\" align=\"right\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Even though I&#8217;ve done this a lot, I was nervous going into the meeting &#8212; there were sooooo many holes in the document, and I didn&#8217;t want &#8220;Rebecca&#8221; to think I was a doofus.\u00c2\u00a0\u00c2\u00a0 And when we started, she told me that she had an event the night before so only had time to briefly skim the document.\u00c2\u00a0 I kicked myself for making such a basic mistake: I should have sent it out earlier in the day to give her more time to read it.\u00c2\u00a0 But oh well, what can you do.<\/p>\n<p>I started the meeting by checking to see how much time she had; she told me she had a hard stop at 10:30.\u00c2\u00a0 We had some other topics we needed to discuss, so it was 10:15 by the time we got to my startup idea.\u00c2\u00a0 For the first five minutes, she dissected the business summary and product\/solution sections.\u00c2\u00a0 She had lots of great observations, including &#8220;right now it becomes clearer what you do in the problem solution paragraph, can you move it earlier?&#8221;\u00c2\u00a0 and &#8220;You produce Q&amp;A for people.\u00c2\u00a0 Which people?\u00c2\u00a0 I&#8217;m a person on the planet, in your target market, what engages me?&#8221;\u00c2\u00a0 Great stuff.\u00c2\u00a0 I took notes frantically.<\/p>\n<p>Then we took a step back and I gave her the pitch verbally.\u00c2\u00a0 As I had suspected, she didn&#8217;t know the space in any detail, so I took a couple of minutes and sketched out how Naver&#8217;s a role model, Blekko and DDG are moving the ball   forward, and Demand Media&#8217;s business model has been upended by Google&#8217;s   algorithmic changes.\u00c2\u00a0 Then I described why my new idea was different and better &#8230;<\/p>\n<p>And she loved it!<\/p>\n<p>Like many people,\u00c2\u00a0 I&#8217;m much better at talking than writing.\u00c2\u00a0 So the language I used was a lot more vibrant and clearer.\u00c2\u00a0 For eample, I said that combining Q&amp;A systems with algorithmic search led to &#8220;the best of both worlds&#8221; and &#8220;gives you better results in a world where Google results are declining.&#8221;\u00c2\u00a0 It&#8217;s a great summary of the problem and solution &#8212; much clearer than the language I had written down.<\/p>\n<p>NWEN Executive Director Rebecca Lovell tells me she regularly meets passionate people who are captivating when they  describe their idea, but &#8220;something happens to them when they sit down at  a computer and try to put it into this executive summary format.\u00c2\u00a0 It&#8217;s a serious case of Lost in Translation!\u00c2\u00a0 Engaging vernacular somehow  gives way to formal, academic, polysyllabic, and\/or generic language.&#8221;\u00c2\u00a0 Indeed.\u00c2\u00a0\u00c2\u00a0 So exercises like the one I did on the phone call, talking about your idea to somebody and seeing what resonates with them, are a good way to get more of your authentic voice into the one-pager.<\/p>\n<p>By now it was 10:27 so we quickly wrapped up.\u00c2\u00a0 I went over the top-level items of her feedback to make sure I had it right, asked her if she was willing to take another look after I had done a few more iterations (she was), and we said our goodbyes.\u00c2\u00a0 I quickly wrote done some additional notes while the meeting was still fresh in my mind &#8230; 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